Tuesday, November 4, 2014

 This week in class we gathered into groups to critique each others projects. The group consisted of myself, Robert Bejach, and Gabriel Donohoe. It allowed us to get a fresh perspective of each others work and get a better sense of direction of what we should focus on more and how we can improve our projects. Even though they liked the concept, there was still some needed explanation, which is a telltale sign that my concept could be a little more symbolic.
Robert suggested modifying the traffic light to give it more of a balanced look, and the yellow may be overpowering the concept. Gabriel suggested being more simplistic with the car on the scale. I definitely have a good sense of direction at the end of the critique.

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